This is the continuation from last week’s story…
“You can find your own way home.” Sharise mocked as her sister stormed away. “Fine, I don’t need your help anyway. I can find my own way home.”
She turned and one of the ducks glanced up at her. She smirked. “What are you looking at? You’re lucky I don’t know how to turn you into dinner.” She stomped a foot on the ground. “Oh, darn you servants for spoiling me.”
Sharise walked along the path, trying to find the exit of this ridiculously gigantic park. Along the way, her brain was busy working, coming up with a spell that really could get her home. She bit her nail. “What the heck rhymes with home? It was so easy for Sasha, all she had to do was be nice.”
Stomping hard on the red brick road, she didn’t realize the brick road had turned into a pavement nor did she realize she was heading toward a gazebo. “Welcome,” a voice said as she stepped into the gazebo.
“Oh my gosh,” Sharise jumped and turned around. “Grandmother?”
(~175 Words)
I am participating in Priceless Joy’s flash fiction challenge, Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writer, where we write a piece between 100 and 150 words (more or less 25 words) in length inspired by the photo prompt above.
That is very good! It had me fully engaged! I am thinking that her grandmother is a ghost? This is very interesting!
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Thank you. I can honestly tell you though, her grandmother is not a ghost. We shall see more in the next installment. 🙂
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Very nice! So cute how she talks to the duck 🙂
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Or snaps angrily at the duck. 😀 Thank you for reading.
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I see it is going to be continued forward..i enjoyed every word of it
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Thank you.
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Good story. Like how the grandmother is waiting in the gazebo
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Thank you.
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Enjoyed your continuation. Left me wanting more.:)
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Thank you. More are coming! 🙂
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Great continuation! Is Grandmother going to be helping her to learn witchcraft? You’ve created an interesting character with spoilt, selfish Sharise. I look forward to reading more. 🙂
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Thank you.
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I like the way you show Sharise as such a spoilt brat, Yinglan, and I look forward to reading about her meeting with her grandmother. 🙂
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I enjoyed writing that too! Can’t wait to write next week’s continuation. Crossing my finger on a good picture. 😀
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I think you’ll manage to write a story, Yinglan, no matter what the prompt is! You usually do. 😀
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Ha ha, sometimes, it takes me a while.
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I love the way you created the character of Sharise,very close to reality. Now, to see if grandma is going to teacher some lessons. I guess i’ll have to wait for the next episode then. 🙂
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Yup, that’s correct, next episode. Thank you for reading. 🙂
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