Wrapping my jacket tight around me, I watch the sunset.
It’s been 10 days since he broke my heart at this very spot, I’ve sworn I’ll never forget.
Oh he’s gonna pay for this or my name isn’t Juliette.
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Great lines! I only noticed the rhyme with the last line, so I had to go back and read it a second time; it was even better then. Thanks for contributing this week 🙂
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I think it sounds better with rhymes. 😀 Thank you for reading.
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Alas, the sun has set on him.:-)
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I love that her name’s Juliette. We think of R&J at once and it’s a big contrast with the story we know. Great piece! 🙂
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I wanted to name her something else but I couldn’t think of another name that rhymes with the other two lines. 😀 Thank you for reading.
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My pleasure! It’s a great challenge! 🙂
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Wow! Juliette is vindictive, I like her already 😛 😉
You have written this very well! 🙂
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Yes, she is. 🙂 Thank you for reading.
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😀
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A dish best served cold Revenge
yep hell hath no fury hey…
I heart this
~B
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Ha ha, love the comment. 😀 Thank you for reading.
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🙂 pleasure ♥
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I see what you did there. You’re a clever one. I definitely loved the threatening line. Well done.
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Thank you. 🙂
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You’re welcome. Thanks for sharing.
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Oh yes, take that, Romeo!
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Hahaha 😀
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Love Juliette’s determination!
Also didn’t notice the rhymes until looking through the comments. That’s really cool!
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🙂
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LOL! Sweet revenge tastes so good.
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A great take on the prompt – I wonder what she’ll do?
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Thanks. I’m sure she has something vindictive on her mind. 🙂
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Certainly sounds that way – I wouldn’t want to be him right now!
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Haha, me neither.
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