
On high alert, Edmund tiptoed around the garden. If he’s caught once more by the house-keeper, Mrs. Pottsworth, his privilege to go outside would be taken away. Mrs. Pottsworth kept telling Edmund the current situation was a dangerous one. Edmund didn’t understand. The Germans would never think of bombing his uncle’s mansion and frankly, Edmund was bored.
“Help!” A muffled scream distracted him from his thoughts.
Around the corner, Edmund discovered a gray door barred by chains. The scream seemed to had originated from behind the door. “Hello?”
“Edmund! Let me out of here!” It was the voice of his dead mother.
(101 words)
Each week, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields-Addicted to Purple hosts Friday Fictioneers where we’re challenged to write a piece of flash fiction in 100 words, more or less, based on the picture above.
That was creepy…
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Agree, it’s the beginning of something of horror.
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Eee, what will she do when he lets her out?
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I think a better question would be whether that’s really her screaming behind that door and not something imitating her.
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Mrs. Potsworth is keeping his mother as a captive! She isn’t dead at all! Great story, Yinglan!
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Or is she? 😉 Thank you for reading.
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LOL! It could be a ghost…. 😀 😀
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…or someone or something imitating his mother’s voice. 😀
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Yes, it could be that too! That would leave the story wide open as to why would someone do that??
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Absolutely! 🙂
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Wow very scary! Is his dead mother truly locked inside or is it something more paranormal. A trick to get him to open the doors.
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Thanks. It is something supernatural. I must’ve been thinking of the vampires diaries while I was writing it. 😀
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Haha. I love that show. I probably said before! I was sad it wasn’t on this week. Lol.
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I’m glad it’s not on this week. It’ll give me time to catch up. 🙂
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Really good. I love this kind of mystery. 🙂
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Thanks. 🙂
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Aaahhh but was she really dead?
Good build up!
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Yes, she was. Thank you for reading.
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