As his vision slowly returned, three women stood arms folded before him, all donned in black leather. He knew them. In the middle stood his wife and beside her were his mistresses. How did she know? How could she know? He had kept the relationships discrete.
The pain began to come back to him – his head followed by his wrists.
Someone had bashed his head against something sharp earlier tonight as he exited the restaurant before zip-tying his hands and dragging him to wherever this was. “Thirsty?” Mistress A spoke in a seductive voice as she waved the glass of water in his face. He nodded quickly. She tilted the glass to his lips and less than an inch from his lips, she pulled away and said coldly. “You don’t deserve water.”
Mistress B pulled a gun from behind her and aimed it at him. “No,” His wife said urgently, “It’s too quick. He doesn’t deserve quick.”
Mistress B grinned, “Oh I know. He likes things slow.” In a bang, she shot him in the gut. “There, now, he can take his sweet time to bleed out.” She threw the gun to the ground. “Let’s get out of here.”
(200 words)
A Response for Sunday Photo Fiction.
Never leave the weapon behind! That gun is crawling with evidence. 😀
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I sure hope she was wearing gloves and scratched off the gun’s ID. Otherwise, that gun will indeed be crawling with evidence. Thank you for reading. 🙂
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Such a creepy story. Well told.
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Thanks. 🙂
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That’s deep😨
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Haha, not really actually. Thanks for reading. 🙂
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I guess I will never know until I’m shot in gut? 😂😂
Your welcome! 🙂
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Actually, according to the tv shows I’ve watched, a shot in the gut doesn’t penetrate any vital organs. So it won’t kill a person as fast. But I agree, I guess that’s only one point of view and we will never know unless we actually get shot in the gut. 😀
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Haha I agree. That’s what TV shows n movies show to the person who plays prominent part in the story. Rest of extras tend to die irrespective of where they are shot 😂 (logic behind fiction I guess.)
Anyway, it was a good read. You must try to write one-shot or something.. I don’t know. You have a good knack at story telling! 😊
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Thanks. I will try it in another story.
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That is what he gets for having mistresses! LOL!
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Yep! 🙂
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You had me at “black leather.” 😉
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Well, I can’t exactly say I feel BAD for the guy…but was murder really the answer? I wish the women would’ve disposed of the gun properly though! How To Get Away With Murder Rule #1! Lol
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Haha, guess they didn’t learn this rule. 😀
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Maybe each wanted the gun as evidence so they could turn state’s witnesses and get rid of the two “extras.” Oh, my, I’m getting complicated.
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Hmm, not sure.
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Whoa. You know you’ve watched too many police procedurals when you start thinking about crime scene evidence, witnesses and alibis upon reading this post. I did! 😁
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I don’t watch a lot of police procedurals but I guess enough. 😀
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😁
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Reminds of this Carrie Underwood song with one more mistress “Two Black Cadillacs” I think it’s called. https://youtu.be/oVEBZLrjpw4. He’s a jerk but as they say, two wrongs (or more) don’t make a right.
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Exactly, I was listening to that song a few days ago trying to get another song out of my head. 😀 I watched the video a while back and it must’ve gotten stuck in my subconscious.
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Nice. Good music taste 🙂
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Thanks. 😀
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Whoops. Don’t think he was discrete enough. He forgot the first rule of cheating on your wife … DON’T!
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Haha!!! Yep, he definitely forgot. 😀
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