I knew something wasn’t right the moment I stepped out of the office. My surroundings hissed and hummed noisily with warnings of a storm. Yes, I have a special six sense and it told me this was no ordinary storm. Quickly, I crossed the parking lot to my car and slammed the driver side door shut. Slowly, I closed my eyes and took several breaths. It’s just a storm, I told myself. No big deal.
As I got on the highway, the sky began changing, from its usual shade of blue to yellow to flaming red. The humming grew louder, so loud I could no longer hear the news reporter on the radio nor could I concentrate switching my foot from gas to the brake as the highway turned into a parking lot. Suddenly, everyone got out of the car and gazed unblinkingly at the blood red sky. I got out too.
As the large black disk emerged from the clouds, everything became silent – car engines no longer humming, phones and radios silent, civilization wiped.
(~175 words)
I am participating in Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writer, where we write a piece between 100 and 150 words (more or less 25 words) in length inspired by the photo prompt above.
In a similar theme, only slightly longer and a bit more sweary https://sandmanjazz.wordpress.com/2016/05/20/the-storm-breaks-fiction/
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😀 I’ll go check it out.
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Ohhh wow Yinglan, what an apocalyptic twist!
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Thank you. 🙂
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wish the prognosis turned out to be false. civilization wiped out…. so sad.
http://ideasolsi65.blogspot.in/2017/06/the-dark-night.html
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Hopefully, it is a false one. Thank you for reading.
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Ooouuee, an end of the world story! Very chilling and tense!
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Thank you. 😀
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Great story!
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Hope they come in peace, to help humanity sort its self out.
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Let’s hope. 🙂
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Aliens!
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Haha! 😀
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Woww, That is a great story. Great twist at the end… Kept wondering, as read, what was coming – something paranormal or otherwise, was it related to a bad experience or was it just a really nasty nasty storm.
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Thank you. I think something was coming and they’ve brought an emp with them.
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Hello. I really love your description of the scene. You really pulled me into the story with your words, and I was in suspense the whole way through! Fantastic writing 🙂
– Carly
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Thank you. 🙂
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I like the way the story suddenly takes on a whole new feel right at the end. Not a storm at all but a threat to the Earth! Nice one, Yinglan.
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Thank you. 🙂
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