
It happened almost instantaneously. She was sitting at the bar when he walked in. “A shot of vodka.” He told the bartender when he arrived at the bar.
“What is a man like you drinking vodka?” She asked as the bartender poured his vodka. “You’re a whiskey man, aren’t you?”
He stared. She was correct. He hated vodka. She hopped off the stool and made her way to the door. She looked back and winked, goading him to follow her outside to the back alley. The rest was history as he woke up alone next morning, naked in a bed.
(100 words)
Each week, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields-Addicted to Purple hosts Friday Fictioneers where we’re challenged to write a piece of flash fiction in 100 words, more or less, based on the picture above.
Naked and without his wallet?
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Yep, if you say so. 😀
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Ooh. Dumb guy. Serves him right.
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Haha!!! 😁😁😁
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He got his comeuppance.
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Well now… this could be taken many ways… there’s no mention of whether or not he is alone and naked in bed… it could have been love at first sight!
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Actually, it did mention he was alone but I agree, it could be taken in many directions.
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Ah well, he could have been alone in bed and she in the bathroom… 😉
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Very true.
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Reversed roles of slipping someone a Mickey. I like it..
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Very interesting. I like the his storyvery much. Although, I did wonder at first if would wake up without a kidney in the bathtub, or at least without his wallet.
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Haha! I’m glad you like the story though I would wonder whether he had dreamed the whole thing or whether the girl was real. Sometimes, it’s hard to separate fantasy from reality when someone like this guy is desperate. 🙂
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Desperate, or he’s done the same too man women so it catches him off guard. Lol
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So many ways to think about what may have happen to him, great teaser of a story, well done
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Thank you. 🙂
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I hope his night was worth it as she has probably already cleaned out his bank account, bought a new Mercedes and, many other costly actions.
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Haha!!! I’m sure in a way, it was worth it for him. 😁
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Should have stuck with whiskey. Good story.
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Yep, thank you.
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So, he was stripped of everything. Classic mistake.
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She probably just popped out to buy some croissants or something! It’ll be OK!
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Haha!!! 😀
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Mystery lady ! Great tale!
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Thank you. 🙂
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I hope it was his own bed. Nothing worse than waking up alone and naked in a stranger’s bed. Not that I would know anything about that sort of thing. I’m just assuming. :o) Great story!
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I hope so too though I highly doubt it. He’s probably in a hotel somewhere. 😊Thank you for reading.
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He must have been really upset. Wherever he’s woken it appears he’s been turned over. Has he still got his clothes or have they taken them as well?
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I think disappointed might be a better word for it. I think he still got his clothes. They’re lying on the floor somewhere. 😊
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if there’s any consolation, i hope she cleaned him up before he left. 🙂
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Sucker.
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Well, he may have had a good night but it seems as if he’s about to have a very bad morning. Great story!
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It sure seems so. Thank you for reading.
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