September 29, 2016
Dear Autumn,
I want to thank you. Because of you, I met the most perfect guy today. It was while I was walking in the park, admiring the trees’ ever-changing colors. Autumn has always been my favorite season. I guess I’m attracted to dead leaves. 😄
Anyway, I was gazing up at the tree and wasn’t watching where I was going. I walked into this guy with his coffee and dog. “Oh, I’m so sorry.” I said as I stared ghastly at his coffee-stained shirt.
“It’s okay,” he said softly, “I have hundreds of shirts at home.” That was when I looked up and met his eyes and was mesmerized. It was like looking at liquid emerald. “Hi,” he smiled like a movie star, “I’m Andy.”
I opened my mouth but nothing came out. “I-I’m Grace.” He smiled again which caused me to drown in love and happiness.
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September 30, 2017
Dear Autumn,
I want to thank you. Because of you, my heart is broken into a million pieces. Andy and I returned to the spot we met a year ago and there, he told me he’d met someone even more special. I was wrong about you. You’re not my favorite season.
(200 words)
A Response for Sunday Photo Fiction.
This is simply delightful.You may have more luck in the spring Grace!
Click to read my PhoFic!
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Thank you. 😊
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Try Summer! 🙂
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😆
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I love this!
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Thank you. 😊
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Great response to the prompt. How sad how things change like that. Maybe another season will be better?
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Thank you. Maybe another season will be better.
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Gee, Autumn sucks in the end. Nice letter-writing style
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Thank you. 😁
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Interesting take on the prompt. Liked the letter writing style.
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Thank you. ☺
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ooo la la
love is in the air!
and glad he has more shirts
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Andy’s kind of a jerk.
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I agree.
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Once you realize he was a jerk, you’ll love autumn again
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I’m sure she’ll find her way to love autumn again.
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The changing seasons are a reflection of the vicissitudes of life. Good writing.
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Thank you. 😊
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The diary format is appealing, with a future date. Imagined fears … 🙂
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I originally went with the story format but thought this format would better highlight the narrator’s emotions.
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Hahahahahaha! I love this!
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Thank you. ☺
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The beginning of a beautiful relationship. Well done.
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And the end of that beautiful relationship. 😉
Thank you for reading.
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The story of life in two short epistles.
Nicely done.
(But we never trusted Andy, just too smooth!)
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Thank you. 🙂
I never trusted him either, it’s too coincidental and a little fake. 😀
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Ouch. We can only hope that Andy someday feels the way she did, and that she finds someone more deserving. Good story Yinglan.
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Thank you. I think if Andy felt the way she did, he’d regret what he did to her.
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This was a tad depressing at first, then I read the ending and you made me laugh.
/thumbs up
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Thank you, glad you liked it. 🙂
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👌👌👌
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