
The detectives walked through the house in disgust. They’re investigating the prime suspect of a murder case. Detective Bear took a peek at the vases by the window. “Oh would you look at that,” he said, “this sicko likes to collect the ashes of his victims.”
Detective Keith crossed the room and peeked into the vase, “We should take a sample of each to find out who else this psycho has killed.”
His partner nodded and looked around the room. “I can’t describe it but there’s something unsettling about this case.”
“How so?”
“I’ll tell you back at the station.”
(100 words)
Each week, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields-Addicted to Purple hosts Friday Fictioneers where we’re challenged to write a piece of flash fiction in 100 words, more or less, based on the picture above.
Nice … and creepy 🙂
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Thanks. 😁
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… that is quite time for a trophy collector
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Good one!
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Thank you.
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Oh dear- it appears my killer’s future is foretold in your tale. I wonder what the detective is thinking…..maybe a clue lies in my tale😉
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I wonder what they’re thinking too. 😃
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🙂
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I’d like to have been a fly on the wall at the police station!
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Me too, that’d give me so many ideas for stories. 😃
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Nicely constructed–and leaving us hanging, just like I did in my own piece. I was glad for the 100-word limit, because I had no idea at all where to go next 🙂
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Thank you. I’m glad it’s only 100 words too because I too have little idea of what will happen.
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Gruesome! What weird trophies to collect.
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I know, right? ☺
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😂😂😂humorous
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A savvy detective with more info to give. This leaves the reader with the desire to know more.
Nicely done ….
Isadora 😎
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It sure does. Thank you for reading.
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Serial killers do love their trophies, don’t they?
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They sure do. 😀
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