As the cool morning air swept across my face, my first instinct was to get up and close the window. Why was the window open anyway? I wondered. I usually lock the window before I would go to sleep. But as I felt the surface beneath me, my eyes flew open. I was not in my bed. I was not in my bedroom. I was in the middle of an asphalt road.
How did I get here? Have I been sleepwalking again?
I haven’t sleepwalked for years. No one knew why the sleepwalking stopped. I guess everyone just accepted as a miracle.
Sitting up, a pain hit me like nothing I have experienced. The bottom-half of my nightgown was torn to shreds and in the dim morning light, I saw the long, deep, jagged marks on my right leg. Slowly, I ran my fingers over them. They burned and stung like hell.
What in the world happened?
Slowly, I got up. There, in the dense morning fog, I saw a pair of glowing red eyes.
(~175 words)
I am participating in Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writer, where we write a piece between 100 and 150 words (more or less 25 words) in length inspired by the photo prompt above.
Oh wow terrifying. Great write!
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Thank you. 😀
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Wow! Spooky! Finding yourself sound asleep in the middle of the road with a pair of red eyes staring at you! Great story, Yinglan!
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That is spooky and frightening. Thank you for reading.
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Reblogged this on Go Dog Go Café and commented:
Amanda nominated this piece of flash fiction for Pay It Forward Thursday
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Whoops! Things are getting worse. Love the story.
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Yep, things might be looking ominous for our narrator. Thank you for reading.
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What a curious mystery!
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Thank you.
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Ooo..creepy! 😀
Nice one!
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Thank you. 🙂
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Most welcome! 🙂
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Sleepwalking and then seeing a pair of glowing red eyes is intriguing and spooky.a story well penned.
https://ideasolsi65.blogspot.com/2018/09/the-fog.html
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I like this kind of stuff! 🙂
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Me too. So much suspense. 🙂
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This is a great piece. I like the suspenseful/mysterious ending.
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Thank you.
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You’re welcome!
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Beautiful piece! Enjoyed reading it 🙂
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Thank you. 🙂
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Beautifully said !!:)
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Thank you.
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Yikes! That was terrifying. Good one.
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Thank you.
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Welcome! 😀
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Hi! I just found your blog and enjoyed this flash fiction a lot. I am intrigued and want to know more. It reads like a prologue to a novel 🙂
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I’m glad you enjoy it. 🙂
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