
I live in a doomed world, I think grimly as I huddle in the dark corner of the Red Mountain Market and Deli, my go-to grocery store some 20 years ago. Teeth clattering, hands shaking, I reach into my jacket pocket for my trusty bottle of Ibuprofen. Great, final two.
After a moment of hesitation, I pop them into my mouth and crush them with my teeth, waiting for the pain to subside. The bitterness no longer bothers me, not after 5 years.
What is happening to this world? I wonder.
This world’s going to hell, that’s what’s happening. My subconscious replies.
(100 words)
Each week, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields-Addicted to Purple hosts Friday Fictioneers where we’re challenged to write a piece of flash fiction in 100 words, more or less, based on the picture above.
The atmosphere is bleak, discouraging, and dark—just as you planned it. Good job 🙂
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The picture looked quite bleak to me from first sight which made it hard for me to come up with anything happy. Thank you for reading.
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A doomsday tale for sure. Nicely written.
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Thank you.
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sad depiction of a homeless person living on the edge. obviously, he needs help for a long time now.
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I wouldn’t say the narrator is homeless. I’d say he has a home somewhere but just can’t get to at the moment.
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Nicely done. And so sad.
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Thanks and yes, it is indeed a sad tale.
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