“I’m telling you, he isn’t a good man.” Her sister’s words came echoing in her brain as she crouched lower behind the shrubs. Despite the roaring river beside her, all she could hear was her heart’s thump of terror.
“Oh Val, where are you?” Her boyfriend sing-songed, cracking his knuckles. “Come out and play. You know you want to.”
Val gulped, pondering whether she should jump into the swift water and get it over with. It was then she heard a loud wham and a dull thud. “Val,” came her sister’s voice. “What did I tell ya? He’s no good.”
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This is Another Story 
Very good in style and content. Happy for the heroine’s rescue. The world is better off without the loser.
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Thank you and I agree. The world is much better off without this kind of people.
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I’m seeing Jack Nicholson in the Shining
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He’s an evil git! Good story!
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Thanks. 🙂
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Great story. Looks like the sister won out in the end.
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Thank you.
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Thank goodness for sisters! Especially sisters who pack a good punch.
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Absolutely!
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So well written. I’m glad the sister was there.
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Thank you. I’m glad too the sister found them.
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Sister to the rescue. He sounded pretty evil. Nice one.
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Thank you. He does sound evil.
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I’m glad she didn’t jump – maybe they can throw him in instead!
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I’m glad too. Throw him in, that will sure be justice well served.
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Sisters always have our backs. I’m glad hers was there.
Stay Safe 😷 Isadora 😎
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Yeah, there are some awesome siblings out there. 🙂
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Thank goodness for Val’s sister!
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