Friday Fictioneers: Now, that’s committed…


Please Note: this is 100% fiction.

“Are you thinking of retiring?” Steve asked as he watched Ernie handed him a surfboard with trembling hands. Ernie had been working at the boathouse for as long as Steve’s been surfing and as Steve brushed back his full-head of peppery gray hair, Ernie chuckled.

“Heck no, the only way I’m retiring is when I’m dead. Last time I checked, I’m 95 and still kicking.”

Steve never thought that would be his last conversation with Ernie because a few hours later, the boathouse was cordoned off by police tape, Ernie’s body was under a white sheet. Death by heart attack.

(100 words)

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