“It’s time,” a raspy voice spoke into the man’s earpiece. The man wearing dark sunglasses stood up and pulled two military-grade rifles from inside his black wool trench coat. “For our country,” he muttered and fired two shots in the air. The entire room froze. Women dropped their luggage and screamed while men ducked, their fight or flight responses kicking in. “Everybody down now!” He ordered.
A few yards away, she crawled beneath the benches, shaking with fright. Her trembling hands wrapped protectively around her bulging belly. “The baby will due any day now,” she recalled the doctor’s words from this morning. Why can’t something go right for once? All of the sudden, a sharp pain hit her from below. The baby. Biting her lip, she refrained from screaming.
Outside the Washington D.C. Union station, police officers, SWAT, and FBI agents gathered. They got a tip fifteen minutes ago detailing what would go down in the station. “There’s a hostage situation in there, I say we take this slow otherwise, he might just start shootin’.” …
(~175 words)
I am participating in Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writer, where we write a piece between 100 and 150 words (more or less 25 words) in length inspired by the photo prompt above.
Great scene of terror and drama. Very cinematic.
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Thank you. I must had watched too much TV to come up with this scene. 😀
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Yes too much TV 😀 nicely done Yinglan.
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Haha 😀
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such drama and you tell it so well!
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Thank you. 🙂
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Very thrilling and gripping!
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Thank you.
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Action-packed in so few words! Great story. I could visualise every detail.
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Thank you.
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Good job! I want to know what happens next.
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Thank you. 🙂
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Great story, Yinglan! Very tense!
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Thank you.
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Exciting Yinglan. Eerily something that could be too real. I hope for the pregnant lady’s sake, things don’t take too long.
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Yeah, I saw the whole thing in my head the moment I saw this picture, just had to figure out how to put it in words. Thank you for reading.
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Nice, you did a great job 😊
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Thanks. 🙂
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Great story telling Yingylan. Loved the cinematic feel that it had.
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Thank you. 🙂
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And I thought getting stuck in the middle seat was a bad travel day. Nice story, Yinglan. 🙂
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We all have situations that makes our bad travel days. 🙂 Thank you for reading.
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I could see it as I read it! Fantastic
My FFfAW!
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Thanks. 🙂
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Seems like the feds and police are a little late to the show…nicely written.
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Now they must find a way in. Thank you for reading.
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How tense? I wonder how it all played out? Well written Yinglan
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I wonder too. Thank you for reading.
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Dramatic story telling – I hope it ends well.
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Thank you. I hope it ends well too.
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Great post
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Thank you. 🙂
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Great suspense! I know it is flash fiction but I wanted more! 🙂
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Thank you. 🙂
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What a wonderful Idea. Glad I found your post.
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Thank you. Glad you found my post too. 🙂
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Superb! Short but really riveting. I’m sure you must have heard this before but you are so talented 🙂
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Thank you. 🙂
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