
What’s going on in here? She wondered as she turned on the lights and blew out the candles. The living room of the condo which she’s sharing with her sister was a mess. Half-eaten slices of cheesy pizza laid on the wooden floor while a bottle of expensive wine stood opened on the coffee table with a wine glass half-filled with wine. What is this? She thought as she marched into her sister’s bedroom. “What is the meaning of this?” There she was on the bed, eye red from crying and immediately, she knew her sister got her heart broken.
(100 words)
Each week, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields-Addicted to Purple hosts Friday Fictioneers where we’re challenged to write a piece of flash fiction in 100 words, more or less, based on the picture above.
So bad, my tip is to bin the wine and pizza, then get out and mixed. Don’t let the son of a bitch get you down.
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Great advice!
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Poor sister, yes we do turn to things of comfort when we’re in great pain. Ice cream or pizza, warm PJ’s, sleeping and crying in bed. Great job at describing this.
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Thanks. 🙂
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poor girl, she will get over it though. my mantra is no one is worth it
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You drew the scene of disaster well. Here’s hoping when she sobers up she can sit down and figure out how to avoid the “lather -rinse -repeat” cycle.
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Thank you. I sure hope too she can get over that phase.
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Oh, let’s hope her broken heart heals quickly.
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Yeah, let’s hope that. Thank you for reading. 🙂
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Ah sisters… that’s what they are for!
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i think that’s what sisters are for. they come to help clean the mess.
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Poor girl. I suppose most experience that type of thing at some stage but it’s always so painful when it happens. At least she has a sympathetic sister to help her through it
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I agree, everyone goes through this kind of situation at some point.
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Ah, we’ve all been there. And he’s probably not worth the tears. Well done.
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Thank you.
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Oh! Wow! This is an amazing story for the FF prompt. So well described.
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Thank you.
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