Lucy and Susan’s phones chimed in unison. Upon subtly glancing at their phones, they jumped up and let out an ear-piercing shriek, causing coffeeshop patrons around them to turn heads.
Faces red, they sank back onto their chairs.
“I can’t believe we got in.” Susan whispered. “We never get into these things.”
“Right?” Lucy hissed.
That night, they arrived at an undescriptive graffitied building for the largest rave in town. They danced and drank until they passed out.
A week later, police discovered their cars near where the graffitied building used to be. The girls’ whereabouts are still TBD – to-be-determined.
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This is Another Story 
Getting in wasn’t the best thing that happened to them.
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As much as being on the in-crowd is a great thing, sometimes being unpopular also has its perks.
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Be careful what you wish for, right?
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Absolutely!
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So much for that party. Sad but nicely done.
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Thanks, sometimes, it’s better to just sit at home and enjoy a night in than a night out. 😀
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Yes indeed.
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They made a wrong move there. That building looks like just the sort of location such dark events might occur.
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I agree.
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A really jolly start, but a worrying conclusion.
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Thanks. 🙂
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Busted! And not in a good way.
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