Her hands hadn’t stopped shaking since she escaped. “I’m innocent,” she muttered through clattering teeth and stepped away from the broken window of the dilapidated warehouse where she’s been hiding and toward the fire she’d built.
“Tell it to someone who cares.” The voice in her head snarled. Immediately, she clapped her hands over over her ears, to shut the voice up. It started the whole thing from the day she went into her boss’s office and shot him in the head.
“It’s all your fault.” She grunted.
“My fault? No one put a gun to your head.” It scoffed.
(100 words)
I like my previous attempt in 2016 better, you can read it here.

Ooh so chilling Yinglan.
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Thank you.
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You’re welcome. I did enjoy it
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I’m glad. 😊
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🤩
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Someone got possessed by a demon! Nice one.
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Thanks. I got a Jekyll and Hyde vibe while writing this story, not a demon possession.
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I knew I was getting the wrong vibe when reading. Thanks for clarifying.
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She doesn’t sound all that innocent, I’m thinking
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Maybe in a way or perhaps she’s being controlled.
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She is reaping the harvest she sowed. Good response to picture.
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Thank you. 🙂
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Yikes! Great piece, the tone really fit the picture. Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you. 🙂
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it looks like she’s starting to lose her mind. sooner or later, she’ll have to pay for what she did.
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I think her mind might be already lost.
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Haunting story. Well done.
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Thank you. 🙂
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She listened to the wrong voice. Chilling story.
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She definitely did. Thank you for reading. 🙂
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