Friday Fictioneers: Surprise Dinner


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“Where are you taking me?” She giggled as he led her up the stairs, blindfolded.

“Almost there, step up here.” He released her blindfold. They were at the top of the tower, where they first danced. In the middle of the room, there was a small table, and on the table, there’s a silver dome, the kind servers used at restaurants.

“What’s all this?” She asked. He smiled, as if she had forgotten an important event. “Wait, did I forget our…” Anniversary? She wanted to say but didn’t feel right.

He pulled a chair for her and whispered. “Happy Birthday.”

(100 words)

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15 thoughts on “Friday Fictioneers: Surprise Dinner

  1. A lovely surprise but I’m a bit concerned that she doesn’t know the date. I thought perhaps she’s struggling with dementia, which gave a bittersweet tone to this story. Lovely, though.

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  2. Sweet story. Growing up, a friend’s mom would never know it was her birthday. She was always taking care of everyone else that she didn’t concern herself with things like her own birthday. That’s what the rest of us are for.

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