“Dad?” My father’s face is blurry like an out-of-focus camera or maybe it’s because I haven’t seen him in almost 30 years.
As we stand at the edge of a great series of waterfall, a thought occurs, am I dead?
Dad chuckles as if he’s reading my thoughts, “No, you’re not dead.”
“Then how did I get here?” The last thing I remember was listening to the Chronicles of Narnia on my bed. It was talking about the children finding a great waterfall.
Impulsively, I hug my dad. “I miss you.”
Dad chuckles again, “It’s time to wake up, now.”
(100 words)
A little behind the story – dad passed away on 6/6/1996. I didn’t know him at all as I was not even 5-year-old at the time. The only way I knew what he looked like was through the great stack of photos I helped digitize this last Christmas. This story is a tribute to him and though it could’ve taken place anywhere, the photo prompt provided the perfect location.
By the way, though there were probably numerous waterfalls in the Chronicles of Narnia, the one I’m referring to in this story is the one in The Silver Chair or The Last Battle, I cannot recall.

Such a poignant story Yinglan
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Thank you. 🙂
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You’re welcome
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Dreams aren’t easy to write. You capture this one with great sensitivity and balance.
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Aah, thats a lovely tribute to your Dad, what a beautifully poignant tale
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Awe, sweet story. I miss my parents. They always read to us.
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Well written.
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Thanks. 🙂
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Beautiful reunion at the waterfall.
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Wonderful story with great feeling. Well done.
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Thank you.
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Made me miss my own dad, who died when he was only 70, I rarely dream about either one of my parents, but they are always a part of me.
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very precious thanks for sharing
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A lovely tribute to your dad, Yinglan. Very well written!
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Good story!
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Thank you.
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this is one of your best. well done.
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bittersweet memories – lovely
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Such a sad story, but it seems that the dream has brought her some comfort and happiness.
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I’m sure it does. 🙂
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A footing choice for this week. 😊
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Thanks.
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