Standing atop the cliff, she looks out to sea. In two days, she will be leaving this fantastic life of living in a seaside village and returning to her life in the city. She sighs, trying not to think about daily grind of her work. She just wishes she can stay here forever but there’s nothing to tie her here, no one…
“Um, Miss?” A voice from behind jolts her from her thoughts. She turns around and instantaneously, her breath is caught in her throat. “I hope you weren’t thinking of jumping because that’d be tragic seeing that you’re beautiful.”
(100 words)
To read my previous attempt at this photo (written in November 2015), click here.
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There was a punch line 😁👍
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It was an attempt at cheesy pickup lines. 😄😄😄
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Nicely written. I hope he has given her a reason to stay?
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Thanks. I hope the cheesy pickup line does the trick. 😀
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I hope so. I like happy endings
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Since she wants to stay, that line may be enough
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It might.
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Life saving words.
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I hoped she wouldn’t lose her balance when her thoughts were jolted. Maybe she’ll stay now. Lovely story.
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Thank you. 🙂
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You are welcome 😊
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Cue the romantic music :). Nicely done.
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Thanks. 🙂
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A cute story. Well done.
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Thank you.
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