Please Note: 100% fiction!
“Meet me on the bridge where we first met,” he said on the phone an hour ago, “I have to tell you something.”
“Can’t you tell me over the phone?” she said, twirling her hair like a giddy schoolgirl.
“Just meet me, okay?”
*****
Clutching her coat tight around her chest, she’d waited on this bridge for an hour. Where is he? Had she gotten the bridge wrong? She tried calling but his phone kept going to voicemail. “Hello, you have reach the voicemail of…”
*****
Ten blocks away, paramedics was zipping him in a black bag after his heart mysterious stopped.
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Too bad.
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Unfortunately…
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🥲
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Maybe that was the message.
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I was thinking the message would be a marriage proposal, not a sudden heart attack.
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You’d know better as the author, but from the reader’s point of view, a lot of other things could have been going on as well.
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Well, even as a reader, I can always imagine all the possibilities.
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Now she will never know what he wanted to say. Well done.
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I guess so, Thank you.
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Oh, that’s a sad ending. Not the news she was expecting.
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Definitely not the news she was expecting.
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So sad.
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well, that was sad. but anyway, i think i saw a typo. should “i have to tell me something”, be “i have to tell you something” instead?
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Thanks for pointing that out, I did not see that.
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Yes in a second life can deal such a blow. Well told
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I agree, life can change at any one moment in time.
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What a sad end! Tragedy and mystery remain.
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