
“Be with you in a minute!” I shout and descend the ladder.
O.M.G., part of my brain shouts as I spot the customer, standing with his back to me, browsing antique. He’s like totally hot.
Yeah, from his backside, another part snorts. I roll my eyes.
Just look at his leather jacket and Oh-My-Gosh, that hair, doesn’t that screams movie-star?
Taking my position behind the check-out counter, I patiently anticipate the moment. When he finally turns around, my jaw drops.
WHAT??? What’s my dorky brother doing here, dress like… Elvis? He nods at me, “‘sup, sis? Ready to go Trick-or-Treat?”
(100 words)

Awkward, yes? Good short story.
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Oh, absolutely. 😀 Thank you.
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Ha ha! So funny. Great take.
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Thank you. 😀
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Oops! That part of the brain is never going to live that one down with the rest!
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That’s brilliant! I bet she didn’t tell him what just went through her mind!
Here’s mine!
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Hehe 😀 I think she’d take this little secret to the grave.
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Ohhh, now that’s just too cruel. Hilarious, but cruel. LOL!
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And a fun story for October. 😀
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Teehee! Great humorous take on the prompt – very imaginative.
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Thank you. 😀
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A really fun surprise :). She see her brother in a different light from now on, I think .
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I think her brother might had been wearing a wig but I have no doubt she will be seeing him in a new light from now on. 😀
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Nice twist. Enjoyed it.
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Thank you. 🙂
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Eek!! That must be quite a dangerous feeling
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It is.
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